I’m on a storytelling spree today, and it got me thinking.
Many rooms address the characeter using second person (you ...
). It’s both ergonomic and intimate. Indeed, without knowing the character’s name and pronouns, it’s hard to be individual, and the repeated they
makes the writing distant. You is warm and cosy.
The issue is that mucklet forces the third person perspective onto you everywhere else (especially in the travel messages). I wonder if we could unify that and make the whole experience better.
What I’m thinking is that all messages seen by several characters are third person (as they are now), but all the messages that are intended exclusively for a single charachter could be rewritten in second person POV. Instead of Shinyuu heads to the Sinder Park
it would be You head to the Sinder Park
. It’s immediately closer and more personal.
Of course, there will still be a mix of third- and second-person POV in emotes written by people, but that’s expected. What I am concerned is the core, experience, things that you see while travelling solo.
I spot-checked a couple MU*s, and it looks like they share the same idea. Here’s “one of the oldest DIKUMUDs”:
Doing this will require a rewrite of pretty much every single travel message, but it’s not extremely bothersome if we only consider the public world. It’s something that can be reliably done in a couple days tops.