Hello everyone, I write this today to inform the Builders of my build, and to request a builder to take a look at it if they have time, the room id is #cf3frdu9gbrm193aqae0.
As a note, the rules of the area are the same as the North Pole and Empire of Linseria area’s.
Alrighty, I gave it a look.
The backrooms are looking very good, only the entry room feels a bit … sensory overloaded. I have divided the shields a bit to make it better readable and not a mess of yellow and white.
All in all is it ready to go, the only thing I see in the first two rooms is that you start the description in a ‚you‘ perspective, but immediately drop it afterwards. Either dedicate to it, or drop the you altogether and stay objective. A more personal you description is more suited for an action room, with the description acting as a rough mood provider, than a static building.
Exits, area and everything is good, could get linked.
I have looked over the first two rooms, and I have removes the you from them, thank you Soulwing for the feedback, I think it is ready for a Builder to look at it again.
I cleaned some of the most glaring typos. The writing’s good overall. I like it.
One thingy I want to point out is that none of the rooms have autosweep. Also, there’s no area description – I think it’d be useful.
I have yet to turn it on, was waiting for the builders to approve before I did, so it didn’t sweep me in case I has a connection issue.
I turned on Auto-sweep, to 5 minutes like the rest of my builds in most of the rooms.
Why would it sweep you? You can simply teleport to all owned rooms at the bottom of the teleport list. No need to artificially keep you in the zone.
I frequently have connection issues, and get put to sleep because I can’t get back on in time before the server times me out, and with auto-sweep on, it will sweep me and make me loose time, it just bothers me when I am working is all.
Fair enough.
Well, with all that taken care off can you link it up. Do you require assistance with that?
I can do it, thank you all.
I have linked Nix’s Nips, per the approval of the Builders.